NOTES FROM A PRO
Transform Your Script with Expert Feedback from Working Hollywood Showrunners
"This is a chance to get real feedback on your script from people who know what they're talking about; because they get paid to do it for a living."
- Michael Jamin
You’ve written your script, poured your heart into the story, and perfected every line of dialogue. But what comes next? How do you know it’s ready to take the next step toward production, pitching, or submission?
That’s where Notes From a Pro comes in.
Three Steps to Go from Aspiring Writer to Professional Storyteller
Write Your Script
Take your ideas from concept to a completed draft that captures your creative vision.
Revise and Refine
Polish your story with rewrites that enhance structure, character depth, and emotional impact.
Get Professional Feedback
Learn exactly how to elevate your script with expert notes from seasoned Hollywood showrunners.
Professional Feedback That Elevates Your Writing
Everything you need to know to break a story, write a first draft, and do revisions with real world examples of produced shows you know and love.
Notes From a Pro connects you with two of Hollywood’s top showrunners, Bryan Behar (Fuller House, The Cool Kids) and Sivert Glarum (King of the Hill, Rules of Engagement). These industry veterans have worked on some of the most beloved TV shows, and now they’re offering their expertise to help you refine your script.
When you purchase Notes From a Pro, you’ll receive:
Detailed Script Notes:
Honest, actionable feedback on what’s working, what needs improvement, and how to strengthen your story, characters, and structure.
Professional Insights:
Learn how your script measures up to industry standards, straight from the pros who know what works on the screen.
Personalized Guidance:
Get clarity on the next steps to take your writing to the next level—whether it’s for your next rewrite or pitching your project.
Feedback From Working Showrunners
Bryan Behar
Emmy Nominated Writer/Showrunner/Executive ProducerBryan on Michael's Podcast
Bryan Behar is an accomplished television writer and showrunner with over 25 years of industry experience. Known for his sharp wit and heartfelt storytelling, Bryan has contributed to some of television’s most beloved comedies, including Fuller House, The Cool Kids, 8 Simple Rules, Last Man Standing, and My Wife and Kids. As a showrunner for Fuller House, he helped bring new life to a cherished classic, earning critical acclaim and a loyal fanbase. Bryan’s extensive career highlights his ability to craft stories that resonate with audiences of all ages, making him a sought-after voice in the world of comedy.
Bryan's Credits Include:
Fuller House
Jennifer Falls
Kirstie
Save Me
Last Man Standing
Glenn Martin DDS
Wilfred
Working Class
Big Shots
The Jake Effect
The New
Adventures of Old Christine
8 Simple Rules
I'm with Her
Andy Richter Controls the Universe
A.U.S.A.
Sivert Glarum
Emmy Nominated Writer/Showrunner/Executive ProducerMichael Discussing Working w/ Sivert
Sivert Glarum is a seasoned television writer and producer with over two decades of experience creating sharp, character-driven comedy. He has worked on some of the most iconic shows in television, including King of the Hill, Rules of Engagement, Just Shoot Me, and Lopez. Sivert's talent for crafting relatable, witty dialogue and compelling storylines has made him a standout in the world of sitcoms. His career is marked by a dedication to storytelling that balances humor with heart, earning him a reputation as a trusted voice in the industry and a mentor to aspiring writers.
Sivert's Credits Include:
Tacoma FD
Rhett and Link’s Buddy System
Lopez
Maron
Gigi Does It
Mystery Girls
Brickleberry
Glen Martin DDS
Wilfred
Rules of Engagement
Out of Practice
King of the Hill
Just Shoot me
Why Does Feedback Matter?
The ability to accept, understand, and implement feedback is one of the most important skills a professional writer can have. The notes you’ll receive through Notes From a Pro will give you a fresh perspective on your work, ensuring your script is ready to make the best possible impression in the competitive world of entertainment.
Why Choose Notes From a Pro?
Unlike generic feedback from peers or writing groups, this is professional guidance from seasoned showrunners with years of experience in Hollywood. Bryan Behar and Sivert Glarum have been where you want to go—and they know what it takes to get there.
Act Now to Refine Your Craft
Ready to invest in your writing future? You’ll receive the kind of feedback that many writers never get the chance to hear. Don’t let your script’s potential go unrealized—take this step to ensure it shines.
Ready to invest in your writing future? You’ll receive the kind of feedback that many writers never get the chance to hear. Don’t let your script’s potential go unrealized—take this step to ensure it shines.
30 Minute Script (Or Less)
30 Minute - Basic
Professional Notes
1 hour Notes Call
1 Rewrite
1 Additional Call
Was: $750
Now: $450
30 Minute - advanced
Professional Notes
1 hour Notes Call
1 Rewrite
1 Additional Call
Was: $1250
Now: $750
60 Minute Script
60 Minute - Basic
Professional Notes
1 hour Notes Call
1 Rewrite
1 Additional Call
Was: $1000
Now: $600
60 Minute - advanced
Professional Notes
1 hour Notes Call
1 Rewrite
1 Additional Call
Was: $1750
Now: $1050
Feature Length
Feature - Basic
Professional Notes
1 hour Notes Call
1 Rewrite
1 Additional Call
Was: $1500
Now: $900
Feature - advanced
Professional Notes
1 hour Notes Call
1 Rewrite
1 Additional Call
Was: $2500
Now: $1500
Every great writer has one thing in common—they never stop learning. Let Notes From a Pro be the resource that takes your storytelling to new heights. Your script is worth it, and so are you.
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